Phone-collecting mountain gods and “rost” ladies
Posted by natecrew on June 9, 2009
After learning about cause and effect, one of my classes was answering this essay question:
“Imagine Mr. Crew got lost at Mt. Sorak. What could be effects? Finish the story.”
Here’s a sample answer, word-for-word.
Mr. Crew made a wood house. Mr. Crew dropped his cell phone in pond.
then an mountain god came there. he bring a haptic and asked him “Is this yours?”
and he said “no.”
soon, god bring rollypop phone. and god say to him, “Is this yours?”
than he said “No”
god bring Mr. Crew’s old phone an asked “Is this yours?”
then he says “Yes!”
than he got 3 phones because the god gave to him. than he sold haptic and rollypop phone, and he is be a very rich.
Another student even hooked me up with a date in his story.
He see a person. He say “hey! I rost. You have a map?”
Person is not say and go. He is angry. “Not good person!”
And one laddy ask to him. “I lost this mt. did you have a map?”
He say “Sorry. I don’t have a map. I rost too.”
At night they are hungry and cold. they find to cave and sleep there.
one grand father care they to his home. They get up, there is a tree house! laddy see a grand father. and they say “thanku!”
